Thursday, October 27, 2011

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1.Introduction
A.Have you ever felt trapped in a specific place,and feel you will never get out of there?
B.Slums negatively impact humans because they are over-crowded,unsanitary, and have high disease rates.
C.A slum is a very bad thing it can effect many people .
2.Defenable point # 1
A.A slum is really bad and dirty place that is over populated and can be very bad
B.Slums is a place that has alot of people living there.
C.If you to live here in the valley and then go to a slum you would hate it because it is over populated.
3.Defenable point# 2
A.Slums are unsanitary and most likely unsafe
B.A slum can be a unhealthy place to live
C.slums are really unsanitary ,can get sick and get a bad infection because of the dirty water
4.Defendable points#3
A.a slum is an area with a high disease rate it will cause you death and create a really bad disease infection
B.a place like this will cause death and has many viruses running around
C.if you can die it can be possible that you will be able to die of a simple infection
5.Conclusion
A.Have you ever felt trapped in a specific place and feel you will never get out of there?
B.Slums negatively impact humans because they are over-crowded,unsanitary,and have high disease rates.
C.A slum will create a really bad impact in your life and will be a bad effect in your life.

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